English- paragraph

Adverbs sentence

curiously,quickly,rapidly,often,importantly,technically,firstly lastly,similarly,readily,interestingly,significantly,remarkably.

Comma goes after the adverb

Often, i'm early to class.
Surprisingly, i got to school on time.


Begin with a preposition

Preposition are words that indicate movement or position.

in, Against,before,between,over,behind,within,under,below,at,
for,throughout,near,about,prior,beyond.

eg Over my head, a bird flew pass
At three o'clock, the school bell rung.

basic body paragraph

Point-State the point you want to make

Evidence-Provide evidence to support your point 2-3 sentences.

Explain-Explain what your point demonstrated 3-4 sentences

Link- Write a sentence linking to the next paragraph.


Point-Everyone knows its better to read the book than watch the movie.

Evidence-For example, the movie made of 'wonder' is very different from the book. It leaves out lost of information. In the book the main teacher is a female but in the movie they are male. Also the camp incident missed out the info about auggies's hearing aide.

Explain- This incident made more sense in the book because he was bullied for having his 'lobo ears' which made him look different. It didn't make sense to bully him in the movie without them.

Link- For these reasons, the book was clearly better than the movie However, you can enjoy the movie without reading the book.


8. -Ed start

1. Committed

2. Undaunted

3. Determined 

4. Forced

5. Gifted

6. Blighted 

7. Thrilled 

8. Delighted

9. Blessed

10. Drafted

11. Surprised 

12. Foreshadowed 

e.g Thrilled by the score, coach shouted us all Maccas.

Committed, to play basketball 

Thrilled, to be back in the team 

11. -The w-start 

who,while,whilst,when,were,what,whereas

e.g Whereas liz played netball, I played hockey

While I played basketball, Liz played netball.

When I got to school, I seen my friends

Point- Everyone at school knows the uniforms are to expensive 

Evidence- For example, our jackets are really expensive and you will be very cold without one in winter. Some kids might not have the money for a jacket because they can't afford it. So if kids can't afford it but they want to be warm the school should put the price down, because a lot of family's cannot afford it. 

Explain-  Its a waste of money because It could be used for something more important, if they were more cheaper it wouldn't be a problem. The schools jacket